Gardening Methods

Can you help me with the english?

Excuse me for my english, i want to know if this text has sense!
I prefer walking than dancing. I usually spend a lot of time for walking because i like it very mutch since i was a little girl, when i often went to the park with my grandmother. I like walking because you can go for a walk anywhere. You can amuse yourself in the city when you take a stroll with your friends for looking at the shops or going to some parks and gardens, and you can see a lot of new people. It’s so nice also walking at the beach and in the mountain, because you can admire some beatiful landscapes. Walking is very useful for your health: it’s good for the heart and the respirationbreathing, you can relax and forget the anxieties of the daily life.

This is how I would write it.

I prefer walking over dancing. I usually spend a lot of time walking because I like it a lot. When I was a little girl I often went to the park with my grandmother. I like walking because you can go for a walk anywhere. You can amuse yourself in the city by taking a stroll with friends and looking at the shops or going to the park. While walking you can see many new people. It’s also nice walking at the beach or in the mountains because you can admire beautiful landscapes. Walking is also very useful for your health; it’s great for your heart and lungs. Walking lets you relax and forget the anxieties of daily life.

I hope this helps, I only changed a few things.

the thoughts and ramblings of a landscape garden designer….